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The dark wars book one

The dark war

The beginning of the war

              

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It was a dark, wet night in Gothaca. Roger was talking to king Duncan about Craig the king of darkness. Who had been leading orcs and goblins from the Darkness into Gothaca. “There heading to dark hill” shouted lukeis as he dashed frew the doorway. “Roger now we know this” …  thad lukeis fell dead with a arrow in his head! Suddenly ten orcs came in with the mark hove Craig

On their shields only

one had a bow. Roger and

king Duncan were both  

armed Roger and a sword

and bow well king Duncan

only had a sword.

The orcs noting that they hard company attacked Roger and Duncan! In a heartbeat  Roger fired the only arrow he had it hit the tenth orc now he did not fare being shot and run at orcs. 4 minutes later there was only one orc left which ran towards dark hill. “Well now we now this you must lead my armies and defeat Craig”!

“Sir Roger is approaching the dead swamp’s shell we wait or fight” said a warg rider. “We shall fight” replied Craig ghrothly. “H h How should I prepare are men” “sir” said the warg rider “You won't I will you maggot now go” Shouted Craig!   

3 days later generals were shouting orders for their troops so they didn't notice Craig's advance. Fortunately Craig was fighting in the swamps so his fastest troops couldn't go at full speed. Suddenly archers noticed the change and released a deadly volley of arrows.  

Craig had been expecting this so he raised a flag and shields went up arrows bouncing off harmlessly.

Now the orks had reached solid ground , and ran at their enemy with wargs running in front of them. Roger had finally noticed this development and pulled his army together. Craig was mad now and sent in more orks! The two armies met each other and the battle of the dead swamps began. Now the tide was changing and the orcs were wining “should I send in more troops”? asked one of the generals. “No” shouted Craig “we most keep some troops back in reserve”.  

“Roger were losing we most send in the cavalry” said Rogers adviser “Fine” Replied Roger. Ma chanted the houses has they thundered towards the orks. By this time the orcs and wargs had defeated the foot soldiers only to find horses charging at them. They formed up with their spears pointing at the enemy. Craig realised he was losing he decided he most retreat “pull back pull back pull back” shouted Craig angrily. The orcs jumped on there wargs and rode them into the dead swamps. “Keep some troops back here to fight Roger” ordered Craig. “Yes sir” replied a ugly, old goblen. A few hours later Rogers troops were shouting in joy “we have done it” Roger told Duncan. “No we haven't” replied Duncan. “Why do you say that” asked Roger. “Because Craig retreated now

he’s in crimson valley” said Duncan. “Why do you care about crimson” asked Roger. “Its were the elves live that's why I care” answered Duncan. “But they”... “just be quiet this is the reason I want to fight it's that if he gets farther back he’ll come back with ogres” said Duncan angrily.

Keep reading in book two “Crimson valley” ...

Rome

Sloths

Owl of the devils

This week we have been learning about DASH? paragraphs for adventure stories.

• D = describe the setting

• A = use action
• S = use speech
• H = describe how the character is feeling
• ? = use a cliffhanger or rhetorical question

We wrote collaboratively today.




As Craig and Sam trotted into the gloomy forest they could see a dim, flickering light in the distance. As they got closer to the  light they could see a owl smoking a cigar and wearing a top hat. Suddenly the owl flew down on them ready to “Run” screamed Sam he heard no reply. Sam was frozen with fear he stood still like he was in a trans. Sam fort was he about to die.

CURRENT EVENTS 1

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Descriptive writing The Death by Craig

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bloggers , This is a charterer description that I've worked on for the last week. It's coold The Death and if you want to find out why you will need to read the text enjoy.

The Death                                                                

The Death has glowing magenta eyes which it uses to spot prey and things that a normal person’s eye couldn't do  such as spotting demons.The Death's head is fall of red feathers that make it look like it's wearing a blood red crown.           

It’s claws are like hooks and are as red as fresh blood.                                                                                                          The Death looks after man and protects as from  evil demons. This beast looks like it has shiny golden rings on its furry tail. But if it's not worshiped it will kill Men,Women and Children! Unfortunately for the Death it has no feelings so it can’t feel pain so it can be vulnerable.  By Craig